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alien race species that combine between Chess and bee, all of them are only has hivemind Conscious with the monarch empress(queen and the most strongest in colony) are the only one have self aware but still in hivemind, they are either lead by monarch empress or lead by pure democracy, in the brood nest came the king(can be found holding the baby)who is bound by Hover throne and only useful for breeding purpose, he has both self aware and conscious of his own with those newborn children are grown up mutate into their designed role, some forming stone bulwarks(rooks), higher prophet(bishop), or aerial scout(knight) that developed two seperated creature like mount and knight, the children(pawn) will be stayed in brood nest until they are mature enough to go outside but some children couldnt reach adulthood and only able to move in really weird pattern due because of genetic decline or other kind of factor, if there is multiple monarch empress then all of them fighting to death until one of them came out the strongest and survive where the hive shall choose her over other death monarch empress, if there is multiple king then they are either death or kick out or leave the hive to create new hive, The pawn are children, The king used to have a Wings but he will lose it once the colony are created, during mating season everyone including monarch empress are going inside brood nest just to mate with king and give him enough sperm to produce more children for the next few years, if he leave the hive to create another then he must to find an area where aerial scout are flying around, he fly over them and the knight will be compete to chased after him, the fastest one will be the one mate him while flying, he did this over 20 aerial scout until he has enough sperm to create hive colony, Mating is like sex in nature or animal kingdom so its basically a massive entire sex gang bang in mating season, His Hover throne is the shoulder are secured in place while king heads are completely secured to a helmet Locking up that is attached to the Hover throne, it look like the helmet have four tube connected to the throne from behind, The king is know to be kind,nurturing,Compassionate and patient who is really care for all of his children, even the only one who felt connection to this child-pawn like their emotion or feeling, the pawn may be highly protected because is valued and take care off(nursing,feeding,cleaned,prioritize protection of children above all else) but no one ever caring for the children, the child pawn have softer less armored bodies than the adult and their eyes are so larger completely dark black, they communicate through pheromones or dancing or sensory stimulation, the defected child might have physical deformities, mental impairments or other disabilities, this chess-bee hybird are appeared to have chitinous armor resemble chess pieces and hive hexagon design, their own weapon is biological that use charged energy as powerfull attack, the king is highly valued for being the most important hearts of the colony but when he become infertile then the colony will not hesitate to kick him out or straight up killed him then create a new one by feeding one of the children royal jelly, this royal jelly has many uses like create new king or create new monarch empress or fixing the defected child, if defected child still remain the same then the colony turn them into a soldier and bring them to war(much the king hate it) the wings of the king will be gone fuse with his body, everyone except king when young have insect like vestigal wings, the aerial scout who fail to mate with the king in aerial mating chase might just survive and live another day, the king felt that even though he is the important hearts in the end is just another unfortunate prizesd asset who is a irreplaceable foundation of the entire hive that will be surely killed once no longer usefull and his existence is the hive not his own, the mating season is Marked by the king are started releasing pheromones that make everyone is colony started felt arousal and excitedly, the mating season last for 7 week by the way, the helmet are used like breathing tube and breathing regulation, he is been taken care off by the colony just like the children like Been feed, protected and cleaned, The brood nest is like a nursery baby rooms, the helmet for the king is like a futuristik dystopian like with a glass that could give us a glimpse of his eyes, the monarch empress may feel love to the king or felt highly protective to him but not loving or completely doesnt care about him at all, Also the king been surrounded by stone bulwarks highly protective of him, The king are the only one able to produce children thats why he get protected by the colony, The stone bulwarks are passive and mindless guardian, will automatically react once the king are hurted by other species, the defected children who is turned into soldier might felt oppresive and scared that they will died so young, Higher prophet is having high intelligent and power with otherworldly Scientific energy source, They could act as advisors to the Monarch Empress, providing strategic insights and technological solutions. Their knowledge could be vital for the hive's survival and expansion. The bishop could be a degree of separation between the Higher Prophets and the rest of the hive, due to their specialized knowledge and abilities, the brood nest is a warm, softly lit space, filled with honeycomb-like structures that serve as individual cribs or chambers for the child-pawns. the walls pulse with a gentle, bioluminescent glow, mimicking the warmth of a womb. There also will be specialized areas for feeding, cleaning, and sensory stimulation, Despite the hive's utilitarian nature, the brood nest would have a sense of quiet, almost maternal, care and The pheromonal atmosphere will be thick with nurturing scents. The gentle hum of the hivemind will create a constant, soothing background noise. there also the soft chirps of the child-pawns, the hum of the hivemind, and the rhythmic whirring of machinery, the king feeling toward many rook surrounding him will be reassuring and oppresive cause he is protected but also constantly reminded of his confinement, Beside just royal jelly used to mutate the pawn child into the new king or new monarch empress or fixing the defect child back to normal(if it doesnt work then might as well turned into soldier) there is another food source named luscent jelly, it has every nutrient the children needed to grow into adulthood and its the main food source for the colony not just the children, luscent jelly are much easier to produce while royal jelly are double on how hard it make, making luscent jelly able to mass produce much faster, Luscent jelly is produced by specialized "worker-producers," a sub-caste within the pawn lineage that develops a unique biological function. These worker-producers have enlarged, bioluminescent glands located within their abdomens. The process begins with the consumption of processed organic matter, gathered from the surrounding environment. This matter is broken down and filtered within their digestive systems. The worker-producers then synthesize the luscent jelly by combining these filtered nutrients with specific enzymes and bioluminescent compounds. This process occurs within their specialized glands. The bioluminescent compounds within the jelly provide a soft, pulsating glow, indicating its freshness and nutritional potency. The worker-producers will then regurgitate the luscent jelly into the storage chamber or directly feed it to the pawn children. The storage chambers are located deep within the hive, designed to maintain the optimal conditions for preserving the luscent jelly. The walls of these chambers are lined with a smooth, waxy substance secreted by other specialized members of the hive. This substance acts as a natural sealant, preventing contamination and maintaining a stable temperature and humidity. The chambers are organized into hexagonal compartments, mirroring the hive's overall structure. Each compartment is filled with a semi-transparent, honeycomb-like material that holds the luscent jelly. The bioluminescence of the luscent jelly creates a soft, pulsating glow within the chambers, illuminating the stored food source. The temperature is carefully controlled by the hive's internal climate regulation system, ensuring that the jelly remains fresh and nutritious. Specialized air filtration systems remove any potential contaminants, maintaining the purity of the jelly. Small worker pawns are constantly monitoring the storage chambers, checking the quality of the jelly and removing any that has spoiled. The chambers are built with easy access for the worker pawns to quickly retrieve the jelly and transport it to the brood nest or other areas of the hive, the storage of luscent jelly is a series of interconnected hexagonal chambers, their walls glowing softly with the bioluminescence of the stored luscent jelly. The air is thick with a sweet, slightly metallic scent. Small worker-producers move diligently, their abdomens pulsing with light as they deposit freshly produced jelly into the honeycomb compartments. The entire chamber hums with a quiet, efficient energy, a testament to the hive's well-organized system. 1. Pawn Children Appearance: Small, almost larval, forms with soft, pale chitinous plates that hint at the hexagonal patterns of their adult forms. Their large, completely black eyes dominate their faces, giving them an almost innocent, vulnerable look. Their limbs are thin and delicate, and their movements are often jerky and uncoordinated. They lack the distinct chess-piece armor of the adults. They may have small, underdeveloped vestigial wings. 2. Aerial Scouts (knight) Appearance: Agile, insectoid forms with segmented bodies and thin, powerful wings. Their chitinous armor is lighter and more streamlined than that of the other castes, allowing for rapid movement. Their limbs are long and jointed, designed for swift, erratic movements. Their heads are equipped with large, multifaceted eyes and sensitive antennae. Their armor has L shaped plating. 3. Stone Bulwarks (Rooks) Appearance: Massive, living fortifications with thick, heavily armored carapaces. Their bodies are encrusted with mineral deposits and organic growths, giving them a rocky, ancient appearance. Their movements are slow and deliberate, like living siege engines. Their armor plates are shaped like the rook chess piece. They have bioluminescent patches that pulse with energy. 4. Higher Prophets (Bishops) Appearance: Ethereal, almost translucent forms with elongated limbs and delicate wings. Their heads are large and bulbous, housing their enhanced sensory organs. Their bodies emit a soft, pulsating glow, reflecting their precognitive abilities Their armor plates are shaped like the bishop chess piece. Their eyes might be completely white, or glow with an inner light. 5. Monarch Empress Appearance: A regal, imposing figure with a heavily armored carapace that gleams with a metallic sheen. Her wings are large and powerful, allowing for graceful flight. Her head is adorned with a crown-like structure, signifying her authority. Her armor has intricate hexagonal patterns and sharp, angular edges. Her eyes are piercing and intelligent, reflecting her hivemind connection. 6. The King Appearance: A large, imposing figure, but with a sense of tragic beauty. His body is heavily built, designed for producing offspring. His wings are fused to his body, leaving only vestigial remnants. His head is encased in the futuristic, dystopian helmet, with the glass eye port revealing his soulful eyes. His shoulder are secured to the Hover throne. He is surrounded by stone bulwarks.

Son parlant des Révolutions américaines, françaises, bolchéviques, du Printemps des peuples, des Gilets Jaunes, des Révolutions de Couleur, de l'Euromaïdan et des Intifadas. Structure épique de 15 vers pour 5 couplets. 1 refrain de 6 vers.